Tarah's feedback on: Archie's Blog Assignment 1

Archie,
Your blog post was very clear and to the point. I could plainly see the examples you used as well as how they related to class. I feel like the only person in the world who has never watched Degrassi, but from what I’ve heard, this episode is just as dramatic as everyone says the show can be. I noticed a couple run-ons and one or two spelling errors, but nothing that distracted from the message you were trying to get across. I liked the examples you used, but maybe a few more from the episode could have given us a little more to understand about the characters. Overall, I think you picked a great episode for this assignment and did well with your analysis.

-Tarah