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Saturday, July 16, 2011

Quay's Feedback on Dan: Two & A Half Men: "The Soil is Moist"

Overall this was a great post and I understood your analysis even though I never watch the show.

Things you did well:
-I think you hit the analysis right on the nose and you did a good job in connecting Pozner's and Lull's pieces to your own.
-Also I liked the structure of the post because It was easy to read and the flow was good.

Things you can improve on:
- The analysis part of this blog post was great, but for a person that never seen this show it was to try to connect to the characters. I think you could have put a little more detail about the show itself and the character before you went into your analysis.
- Other than that everything was good!

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