Jon's Feedback on Sara': "Blog Post #3: 'Sex Room the (real)mix Revised"

Definitely a very cohesive video. The protest is completely and clearly displayed, and it makes sense. I enjoyed the downplay of the song, and the way that the voices are used makes it even more serious...very monotone and sounds "controlling." So I am glad you kept the song. I would have liked more motion, like actual footage. I felt as though I was watching a promotion other than a music video. Also I would have liked a larger bang when you began to talk about trafficking. The larger the bang the more passion you can lure the audience to feel.