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Saturday, July 17, 2010

Derek's feedback on Amy's Masculinity/Femininity Blog Post

think you chose a very good TV show for this assignment.You did a good job exploring the traits/actions of Kurt and relating them to both feminine and masculine characteristics.I think the 9th paragraph was a good way to start off your analysis of femininity relating it to Newman when he says these are inappropriate characteristics for a given gender.

There were a few run-ons throughout the blog post. Also I think the last two paragraphs in your femininity part of the essay could have been supported by a point made in the articles.
Other than that good job!!


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