Cara's feedback on Dan's post: Analyzing a Subversive Music Video

Great job, Dan!
Areas where you excelled:
-I think you picked a great video to go along with the topic of the blog post. It showcases the kind of gender disparities that we have been reading about.
-You picked out a lot of good examples in the video where the idea of "feminine" and "masculine" characteristics were being played with and reversed.

Some areas that could be improved:

-I noticed a fiew grammatical errors and awkward sentences.
-I think you could have expanded more on how the lyrics also relate to dominant ideaologies about gender and what they mean in the context of the video.