I think you picked a good video that subverts how women are usually portrayed in music videos. The artist is "fully clothed" and her dance moves are not sexual in anyway.
Did a good job using articles to support your thesis
There were a few grammatical errors
I think you could have maybe made a few other points of how she subverts hegemonic ideologies, it seemed like you repeatedly used dancing and her dress
Good Job Henry!
Saturday, July 24, 2010