Derek's feedback on Henry's blog post 2

Strengths:
I think you picked a good video that subverts how women are usually portrayed in music videos. The artist is "fully clothed" and her dance moves are not sexual in anyway.

Did a good job using articles to support your thesis


Weaknesses:
There were a few grammatical errors

I think you could have maybe made a few other points of how she subverts hegemonic ideologies, it seemed like you repeatedly used dancing and her dress

Good Job Henry!