Katrina's Feedback on John's Blog "Express Yourself:" Femininity and Masculinity as Portrayed by Madonna

Excelled
- Thesis is reiterated througout the blog explaining what it means to be mal
and female and how the video is an attempt to shatter patriarchal views.
-There is a clear analysis of the gender roles displayed in the video.
Needs Improvement
-Needs improvement in tying more readings to your analysis.
-I would have also mentioned the male gaze depicted within the video. Her husband
is looking through the looking glass and imposing his biased view. He is the
overseer however we see the Madonna's overseeing in the end. I just thought
it was very symbolic and another way she is finally expressing herself.