John's Feedback on Katrina: And the Emmy Goes to...

I love your writing style. I think your voice is very sarcastic and playful, so it made the reading easier and more fun. It's very suitable for blogging. You're also very clear; I have never watched Friends, but I understood the characterizations and situations as you explained them. So bravo!

However, there isn't much of a thesis. Your opening paragraph is wonderful, but it's not really related to the rest of your paper. I like, for example, introducing the framework of the theatre; but you abandoned the metaphor after the opening. You have a strong opening and a strong example, but there wasn't enough to tie them together.