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Friday, May 14, 2010

Chris's Feedback on Jessica's Blog Post #2

Interesting post.

Some things I liked:
1) Great analysis of the song. It fits perfectly with what we've been discussing.
2) Interesting correlation with the Johnson piece.
3) Good use of Pozner as the piece fits well with the lyrics.

Some things that could use improving:
1) Minor grammatical errors
2) You could have maybe used a discussion of hegemony, specifically the use of ideas contrary to the mainstream.


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