Some things I liked:
- Great product choice for this analysis; I would have never thought about using Coke Zero for this assignment but the ads work well with the readings.
- The analysis regarding the use of color fits especially well here.
- As does the use of athletic, muscular men.
Some things that might need improving:
- The in-text citations might not be done correctly; I think you're supposed to include the author's name in parenthesis with the page number but there may be some rule allowing you to not do that. I defer to Jessie.
- You could have maybe tied the use of the unrealistically muscular bodies to the readings more in the third paragraph.
Friday, May 21, 2010