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Friday, May 30, 2008

Sex sells

Name of author- Rob (blog post 2)

Nice job on:
1. I thought that the thesis coincided with the rest of your blog. In the 2nd paragraph, you noted the point that the magazines depict a image of what “girls look up to.” I thought this was a true, effective statement!
2. The collage was also effective, and I think you chose great pictures to demonstrate “sex selling.”
Areas for potential improvement:
1. Possibly the 3rd paragraph. I think it would have been more effective with less description of the picture and more of an analysis.
2. Also, a conclusion would have wrapped up the collage post nicely.


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