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Friday, May 30, 2008

Scott Baio is 46 ... and a mess.

Name of author-Ashley

Nice job on:
1. The pictures definitely added to the post. It really helps identify the characters and get a better idea of their appearance.
2. The analysis in the 4th paragraph where you used the Newman quote discussing the stereotypical lifestyle of a celebrity was highly effective with Scott Baio!

Areas for potential improvement:
1. Make sure that all media used (the videos) work. When I went on the site, the videos said that it was “no longer available”
2. It helps to have a quote from one of the readers per paragraph to reinforce the topics


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