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Saturday, July 30, 2011

Quay's feedback on Dan's: Blog Post #2: Toy Shopping

I enjoyed reading this blog post and particularly like the flow of it. This post was well structured and I like how you inserted the pictures throughout the blog and then analyzed it.This helped me visualize your analysis much better.However, I felt that your thesis statement could have been more complex,would have lead to an even better analysis.

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