Dan's Reply To Quay's Blog Post

Strengths:
That episode is definitely a good example of TV shows trying to promote a certain image. You did an excellent job of relating Hegemony and Pozner to this episode. Your points were clearly stated throughout the post and explained well. You also did a good job of pointing out the general gender roles portrayed in that show.  All of your points supported that main theme of the piece that you were trying to convey.

Weaknesses:
I did notice a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout your blog post like missing commas. I also noticed a few run-on sentences in your post, which made the post a little hard to follow at times. Besides that, I enjoyed your blog post.