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Friday, July 15, 2011

Dan's Reply To Quay's Blog Post

That episode is definitely a good example of TV shows trying to promote a certain image. You did an excellent job of relating Hegemony and Pozner to this episode. Your points were clearly stated throughout the post and explained well. You also did a good job of pointing out the general gender roles portrayed in that show.  All of your points supported that main theme of the piece that you were trying to convey.

I did notice a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout your blog post like missing commas. I also noticed a few run-on sentences in your post, which made the post a little hard to follow at times. Besides that, I enjoyed your blog post.

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