amy your group did a excellent job on improving the video. your strengths were quite clear in the video, firstly i love how you including subtitles to help the viewers understand what your message was. i really loved the new pictures that you pt up especially since it show us how Miley has actually been transformed (tamed) by the music industry. the changes from scene to scene improve it flowed much better and much more fluid. some weakness was that some picture were to short it seem like at points that they we there for only 2 seconds or shorter. also the part with conversation scene, the subtitles there were two fast and hard to read at one point with the pink front. and lastly i would have like if you introduce the video with a subtitle introducing the message earlier. but great job Amy!!!