Dan's Feedback on Cara's Gender and pop culture blog: Subversive Music Videos

Good job Cara!
Strengths:
-Great example of a video that subverts hegemonic ideologies.
-Backed up each point with a relevant quote from the text.
-Was easy to follow and stay on topic with the thesis

Improvement:
-talked just about misogyny and over coming that. I think a point or two also could have been on how the video goes against the hegemonic structure in our society.
-There are only four paragraphs that include analysis this seems a bit short. Another point or two could be made to lengthen the post.