Christian's feedback on Stewart's Blog Post #4

I thought it was nicely re-done. You definitely got a point across about eating disorders. I also thought that there were plenty of pictures of pretty women who were healthy.

I think you could have built a bit more on the dangers of fake tanning, like increased risk of skin cancer. I thought that Snoop's rap could have been handled a bit better too, as you did nothing to say that women aren't still objects. You're just saying that they don't need to starve themselves in order to be accepted.